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Night of Passion

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Night Of Passion

A young woman was walking through the forest towards her house, blissfully unaware of the potential danger she was in. A silver pair of eyes was watching her every move. A hiss echoed from the branches above the woman. Startled, she looked up and saw nothing but autumn leaves in the branches overhead. The creature overhead had hidden behind the trunk of the tree as not to alarm her. The forest was too open, too free, and not safe enough for attack. The creature made a note to ambush her in her own house.

The young lady arrived at home and quickly made for the shower, the creature snuck in and moved around to her bedroom. The bedroom was dark and the shadows hid the creature wondrously. The shower flow stopped and the creature got ready for another meal. The door opened and strangely…the woman did not turn on the lights in her room. Instead, she dried herself in the dark.

Fully nude, the woman jumped on her bed, narrowly missing the creature hiding behind the book cupboard. The woman spread herself out on the bead and removed the covers, allowing the creature to get a full view of her deliciously sexy body. Her hair was the colour of chocolate and it shined magnificently, even in the dim light of the room. The woman reached under her pillow and got her iPod out. She plugged herself in and closed her eyes, her head nodding and feet tapping to the rhythm of her music.

Slowly, the creature edged itself to the foot of her bed. The creature tasted her feet with its tongue and the woman giggled and said ‘Stop it, I’m ticklish there!’ The giggling stopped and the woman opened her eyes. She saw a huge creature at the foot of her bed with a man’s upper body and a snake’s tail. She recognized the creature immediately, from the mythical books she had read in the library as a kid. A creature of great power and beauty. A mystical Naga. She screamed.
The Naga looked at her as it looked at him. She opened her mouth to scream and got a mouth full of tail instead. His tail picked her off the bed and wrapped her in giant coils of muscle. The woman kept trying to scream, but she ultimately failed. Her head and shoulders sagged, and her eyes filled with tears. The coils kept squeezing her and with every passing second, she could feel her lungs gasping for air. She felt the hot breath of the Naga on her feet and realized she was upside down. She felt a long moist tongue wrap around her feet and pull her into the mouth of the Naga. Her eyes leaked tears like a broken tap. Her legs were soon enclosed by the mouth of the Naga, his tongue touched her vagina for one second, giving the woman a small feeling of pleasure before the tongue was removed and the mouth moved up her navel. The tongue felt hot and sticky and her bare chest as the Naga moved towards her head. Her breasts were eaten and the creature kept coming.
A sudden move and she was tilted the right way up. A solitary tear dropped onto the Naga’s face. The Naga stopped and looked at her face for the first time. Her eyes were completely red and tears were streaked up her face because she was upside down. Another tear fell on his face and the Naga began to feel an emotion he had never felt towards his prey. It was sadness.

The woman was squirming as she felt the warmth of his mouth retreat down her slim frame. The Naga slowly regurgitated her and uncoiled her from his tail. Her face was full of tears and her body was shaking. He kept his tail in her mouth to prevent her screaming. He examined her now wet body: her breasts were large and perk, her ass was full, soft and round. Her face was pretty, despite the tears. He held out his arms in a please-can-I-have-a-hug way. She glared at his arms, then his face and slowly leant into his embrace. He pulled the tail from her mouth and waited for an inevitable scream. Surprisingly, no sound emanated from her mouth except deep breaths. She looked up at his head and studied him like he did too her. His face was not overly handsome, but not displeasing either. His chest was muscled yet… not bulging beneath her hand. His tail was around 25 ft in length and patterned in a red and black spiral. It confused and hypnotized her and she stood for at least 5 minutes looking at his tail. The Naga tapped her on the shoulder and she awoke from her trance.
“Are you ok?” He asked
“A bit shaken, why did you try to eat me?”
“You were prey; I have been following you since midday.”
“All that time?”
“Yes.”
“Can you catch me?”
“Why? Are you going to faint?”
“Yep.”
“Before you faint, what is your name?”
“Mary.”
Her knees bent and she toppled onto a waiting pile of coils. The darkness claimed her from reality.

She woke to find herself in bed, the time was 6:00 PM. Sunlight poured through the window and she looked around. The covers were on the floor from the Naga’s arrival earlier tonight. Mary clutched her head and wondered if he even came last night. She wondered if it was just a bad dream. A creak from over head warned her to a presence. She glanced upwards and she saw a different creature in the rafter above her head. She shrieked and jumped off the head, just as it landed on the space where her head was a second before. The bed snapped under the force of the thing landing on it. The thing chuckled and said in a voice like fingernails on a blackboard.
“So pretty, so beautiful, yet not as pretty as me.” Mary saw through the sunlight the creature was actually the most putrid thing she had ever seen. It was in the shape of a young man, but its head was larger than it should have been. Its skin was grey and peeling in many places. Its eyes were red like rubies, its mouth was full of sharp, shark-like teeth and a green long tongue was in the centre. It waved a hand at the floor in front of her and four large tentacles sprang out the ground and wrapped around her arms and legs. She screamed and the tentacles pushed her up to the roof, the slime wetting her wrists and ankles. She groaned in displeasure. The creature on the floor whispered something and another tentacle burst out the floor. This one was larger than the other floor. It seemed sentient because it looked at its master. It pointed at her and it slowly edged up to her. She dropped a meter to allow the tentacle to wrap around her. The tentacle touched her ass and breasts before curling around her. Once it had her tied up, the four smaller tentacles sank back into the floor. The tentacle rubbed over her face while she was occupied looking at the other four disappear. Its slime tasted like a mouldy corpse. Mary spat the slime out. The tentacle dropped her and she landed on the floor painfully. She cried in pain and the tentacle grasped her again. It formed a cocoon around her body and began to squeeze tightly. The slime lubricated the hold, but not enough for her to fall out.

The tight bond that the tentacle would have crushed her, had the Naga from last night not appeared and squeezed the creature like the tentacle was squeezing Mary.
“Call it off!” He said with obvious malice.
“Never!” crowed the thing. It said a word to the tentacle and the tentacle squeezed her even tighter. Then a tentacle popped out from the main tentacle and sank deep into Mary’s vagina. She squealed in pain and pleasure as the tentacle squirmed in her. Then the tentacle was removed and the tight hold of the larger tentacle subsided and it laid her on the floor and both the tentacles slithered back into the floor. Mary was curious to their disappearance, but she was in no state to move. The body of the thing that attacked her was cast into the hole from where the tentacles came. A smooth tail coiled around her arms and lifted her into a comfortable and familiar embrace. She sighed and hugged him back tighter.
“I’m so sorry, I should have remembered.”
“It’s ok.” Mary gasped through her fast-beating heart. “What was that?”
“It was a mage.”
“Ah.” Mary said, none the wiser.
“A mage is a person who deals in the art of magic” He explained. “There are various types of magic like Air, Fire, Earth, Water and numerous others.”
‘How come I’ve never heard of magic?”
“Well…you’re human, and only non-humans can wield magic.”
“Oh.” Mary said “Can you perform any magic?”
“No, my magic was removed when this particular mage stole my magic and transformed me into a Naga. I was originally an Elf.”
“Wow.” Mary said. Looking at her slimy body she says “I better have another shower then, to get of this stuff.”
“Yeah, ok.” He said. A question formed in Mary’s mind, and she wondered why she hadn’t asked it yet.
“What is your name?” She asked
“My name is Jack.” He said. Mary nodded and walked towards the bathroom. Her head was spinning, but the warmth of the shower water cleared her mind. She covered herself in towels and walked back into her bedroom. She expected Jack to have gone to search for more…prey, but Jack was sitting on the floor facing away from the door and reading a book that was on her bedside table. Mary entered the room silently and slowly undressed behind him. She made him aware of her presence when she dropped the towels on his head. He did nothing except remove the towels and continue reading.
“Which book is that?” She asked
“It’s the Darren Shan book “Death’s Shadow”.” He responded.
“I know something more interesting than that book.” She said with a hint of passion.
“And what would that be?” He asked turning round to see her on the bed in the sexiest pose he’d ever seen a person do. Jack smiled, turned back to his book, folded the corner over and put the book back on the shelf. He slid over to the bed and lay back. Mary stood up and sat on his tail. He coiled his tail around her smooth legs and she rested her head on his stomach.
“You know what?” She said. “I think this is going to be a fun night.”

TO BE CONTINUED...
This is my first story to feature a Male Naga in it. All the others have female nagas in them.

Part 2

Edit: Sorted out the speech marks
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